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Underfell - The Ruins redraw

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Someone on Tumblr challenged me to redraw the first page of the Ruins' Arc!!! So I did! >: D


I feel the improvement!!! >u<


Actual first page here:  Underfell - 1 by Kaitogirl        
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I can definitely see how much you've improved and changed with your style here Kaito. Thank whoever that tumblr person was for me:). But I honestly have to say that I like your original page more than this one for your comic. The 1st one gave a much less hopeful and vibrant vibe to the world than this one and in the last panel, the light in the original was the clear harsh type of lighting(at least that's how it came off to me) and gave a bit more of a darker vibe to the surface. Here, it has a much more hopeful, almost ethereal, feel to it. There is also the way the rest of the page looks, which is stark and barren, in a way that makes sense for a cave to be, almost cold even whereas this one is warm, welcoming, and the air is full feeling.

I want to make it clear though, I absolutely love how you did this page and the improvement is very evident from the fingers, the strength of the light rays, the texturing of the walls, columns, and plant life on them, to the roughened patches covering Frisk's body. It's amazing and something else to see the results of an individual having gotten so much better!! My first paragraph was me wanting you to know that the stuff you did in the past are things which I enjoy very much, just as I enjoy the stuff you do now. I hope I didn't come off as bashing this wonderful pageSweating a little....
*Edit:fixed some spelling errors